SpiderWind~KindleClan

[Spider & Co.]

Name;; SpiderWind

Gender;; Tom

Clan;; KindleClan

Rank;; Medicine Cat

Love Life;; None, but he is straight xD

Apperance;; SpiderWind is a large black and white cat, his fur is long a shaggy, his glowing green eyes, his nose is white with a smudge of black, and makes almost a perfect triangle. His ears are small and jet black. His whiskers are very long, and pure-white, his chest is all white leading down to his limbs, the top-section of his limbs are black and the bottom; near the paws are white. His back is jet black and his underbelly is white, with smudges of black. His tail is long and jet black, and white on the tip. The medium sized black tom cat is a in the medium sized weight range.

Personality;; SpiderWind is probably the farthest thing from perfect, he's horrible, and very moody. He is easily annoyed by apprentices, who keep blabbing about "Being the perfect warrior" or "I wanna be the best!". And then there are the junior warriors, thinking they know EVERYTHING there is to know about the Clan Life, bossing senior warriors around, and apprentices. He is very calm around the medicine den, somehow the scent of all the plants and herbs soothe him. He hardly ever spends any time in his den, he likes being out, in the fresh-air, hearing the kits play, and mentors teach. Around his family, which isn't around anymore, he was very wild and giddy. He bounced around and was always happy. But after his last sister died, Chipmunkkit; who soon became Chipmunkwhisker. He wasn't happy anymore, Chipmunkkit was his favorite member of his family, even over his parents, and even extended family. Around kits, he is very calm and serious, because he want's to set a good example for the kits. SpiderWind doesn't really enjoy warriors, there so violent and bloody, SpiderWind is against that, he doesn't fight, he heals. SpiderWind likes his deputy more than his leader, but doesn't really like either one of them very much, it just goes back to the blood and gore stuff, he doesn't like it. SpiderWind has one thing that stops him from being the great medicine cat he is; allergies. He is allergic to poppy seed, which stops him from helping a lot of cats, he tries to find ways to stop this allergy, like smelling something else, to draw away the stench of the poppy seed. But SpiderWind still tries to be the best medicine cat he can be.

History;; SpiderWind was born to: Bluestream and Raindrop. Bluestream gave birth to a litter of three; Spiderkit, Chipmunkkit and Flowerkit, Spiderkit ended up the only tom. Raindrop was very mean and grumpy, leaving his mate to be a rogue. Bluestream on the other hand was, calm and nice. Both of the cats genes were split and given to Spiderkit, giving him a moody attitude. Flowerkit was mentored by Blowingwind, and became Flowerfoot. Chipmunkkit was mentored by Iceclaw and became Chipmunkwhisker. Spiderkit was mentored by Silverjewel, the medicine cat and became SpiderWind. SpiderWinds' parents were now gone, Bluestream had been deaf at the time, but now had became blind too, and was set to rest. The horrific thing is, Raindrop was killed by Chipmunkstripe, and Chipmunkstripe was kicked out of the Clan and nobody knows where she is now. Now we get on to the part when SpiderWind became medicine cat. When Silverjewel had passed on, SpiritClan had chosen SpiderWind as the next medicine cat.

RP Example;;SpiderWind slowly moved from the medicine den, his bronze eyes flicking around for Malllowpaw. "Mallowpaw?" asked the medicine cat. "Would you like to go get some herbs with me?" asked SpiderWind. A small shape burst from the apprentice den. "Heck yeah!" shouted the apprentice, blue eyes glowing. The rain started to pour. "Well, good for finding catmint and poppy seed" meowed the KindleClan apprentice. "Very good," meowed SpiderWind. They exited camp and moved down to the shoreline of the lake. SpiderWind sighted poppy seed. "Can you go get that? You know I'm allergic" asked SpiderWind. "Sure!" meowed Mallowpaw running off to get the seeds. She'll make a great medicine cat one day...

Other;; Nope.

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Alright, there are still a few things I see that need to be fixed before it can be accepted.

Apperance;;
You've described his pelt perfectly but you've left out some of the most important things. What type of build is he? Is he Large? Small? Muscular? Long Limbed? Thin and Swift? Are all his featres the normal size? Is his tail shorter or longer? Those are just some of the questions you need to ask yourself and Modify your post.

Personality;;
Now, you've described bits of what he's like, but have left out some important things. What's he like around the warriors of the clan? Does he respect his leader and deputy? Is he a good medicine cat? What about his loyalty to the clan? Does he have any weaknesses that stop him from being the best medicine cat he could be? Those are just some of the things you could add to really describe Spiderwind.

History;;
Alright, so you've said who his parents were but what about what he got up to as a kit? Why did he want to be a medicine cat? Was he chosen by Yewtree or Spiritclan? What was his apprenticeship like? Was there anything major that he had to do as an apprentice? How long has he been medicine cat for now? Has anything happened in that time? How did his family die? And generally the medicine cat apprentice does become medicine cat after the current one passes away, also the last medicine cat for Kindeclan would have been Silverjewel, as listed in the cats of spiritclan thread.

Roleplaying Example;;
I'm going to have to ask that you write a bit longer of an rp example, i'd like one at least six lines, just to be sure that you can fully roleplay out this character.

[Spider & Co.]

Modified. =]

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ccepted.

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